Post by fai2121 on Feb 23, 2010 17:24:28 GMT
Okay folks...This is the first part of a chain of closely related RP's. It is obviously, the beginning of a grand storyline that is easily influenced by others, but the spine of the story, the base, cannot be changed. Remnant takes place in the following location; Mirasburg, the Aeran capital and most technologically advanced city in the world of Raza'el. The exact starting place? A lab where an experimental weapon is being "Manufactured" This weapon? Fye. Yes, this rp is where Fye is born, along with other events both planned by me and created by others. Fye does immediately join the rp. Probably a short ways into it. And I first start out with an unimportant character, not even worthy of being named. As to what happens in this lab, and to the town once Fye is released? Well, thats really up to the people isn't it?
Feel free to make Suggestions, I will gladly hear them out and am more than likely to take them. The rest of the story will be revealed as more parts are added. And no, Fye is not the sole star, just MY main character. Anyone can attain the limelight, just do something noticeable to the other RPers. Anyway, the only other basic info that you would need is that the entire reason Fye was created is to battle "Sinners".
Sinners come in three general types, the first being the more common. One is formed by the sins that one refuses to come to terms with, and tries to hide away. The more of these hidden, unconfronted sins, the more sinners are created. The sinners first Target? The one who created them. They afterwards go on to kill rather mindlessly, attracted by corrupt souls. This is generally the reason that they seem to attack places like big cities. However, later on, they seem to be acting in an organized manner, but for what reason? And who is the one managing to control them?
The second comes from--or rather is--a person who is way beyond corrupt. They are a slave to their sins and desires. The worst of the worst, who are not only aware of their sins, but take joy in it, actually become this variety, almost always soon after an attack of the lesser sinners. So, yeah, Fye is meant to be a souless killer. That way, he would be unable to be corrupted, and would not have second thoughts about killing someone that was once human, or one that changed before his very eyes, as he would be incapable of feeling.
The last is a method known as subversion. It is caused by a unique Type 1 sinner that cannot exist for more than a few hours (about 6) outside a host body. It is much like a parasite crossed with a retrovirus. It is about the width of a pin and about an inch long. It gets into the bloodstream through open wounds and attaches itself to the heart. Once there, it feeds attaches its aura to the host, and works on making the two separate entities one over a period of time. The result? A slow and horrific change taking place over about three days resulting in a sinner with much higher intelligence, rational thought, a basic emotional capacity, and remnants of the hosts personality, making them "Sub-human". They are generally corrupted to the point of being just as cruel and vicious as type 1 and 2, but there have been a few extremely rare occasions in which they host retains its memory and manages to assume control. Unfortunately, they still have a lowered intellect and a different body.
oh, another thing about the story. The world, although each area has its own government and politics, share the same faith, except for a select few. Their object of worship? The elemental gods/goddesses, and their ambassador, the Overseer. The Overseer is a person born blessed by the Gods, but a mortal. They are clearly marked by Their Black angel-like wings and Violet eyes. The current Overseer, Soriah, though keeping up with her duties, is in a state of constant depression over the disappearance of her son twelve years ago, when he was five.
Yeah...I guess you could say it is a fantasy/horror. I am hoping it will have romance, and humor as well, but that is up to others along with myself. But yeah...I guess it's not that interesting, and maybe a little too complicated...so I don't really expect anyone to post their interest.
Feel free to make Suggestions, I will gladly hear them out and am more than likely to take them. The rest of the story will be revealed as more parts are added. And no, Fye is not the sole star, just MY main character. Anyone can attain the limelight, just do something noticeable to the other RPers. Anyway, the only other basic info that you would need is that the entire reason Fye was created is to battle "Sinners".
Sinners come in three general types, the first being the more common. One is formed by the sins that one refuses to come to terms with, and tries to hide away. The more of these hidden, unconfronted sins, the more sinners are created. The sinners first Target? The one who created them. They afterwards go on to kill rather mindlessly, attracted by corrupt souls. This is generally the reason that they seem to attack places like big cities. However, later on, they seem to be acting in an organized manner, but for what reason? And who is the one managing to control them?
The second comes from--or rather is--a person who is way beyond corrupt. They are a slave to their sins and desires. The worst of the worst, who are not only aware of their sins, but take joy in it, actually become this variety, almost always soon after an attack of the lesser sinners. So, yeah, Fye is meant to be a souless killer. That way, he would be unable to be corrupted, and would not have second thoughts about killing someone that was once human, or one that changed before his very eyes, as he would be incapable of feeling.
The last is a method known as subversion. It is caused by a unique Type 1 sinner that cannot exist for more than a few hours (about 6) outside a host body. It is much like a parasite crossed with a retrovirus. It is about the width of a pin and about an inch long. It gets into the bloodstream through open wounds and attaches itself to the heart. Once there, it feeds attaches its aura to the host, and works on making the two separate entities one over a period of time. The result? A slow and horrific change taking place over about three days resulting in a sinner with much higher intelligence, rational thought, a basic emotional capacity, and remnants of the hosts personality, making them "Sub-human". They are generally corrupted to the point of being just as cruel and vicious as type 1 and 2, but there have been a few extremely rare occasions in which they host retains its memory and manages to assume control. Unfortunately, they still have a lowered intellect and a different body.
oh, another thing about the story. The world, although each area has its own government and politics, share the same faith, except for a select few. Their object of worship? The elemental gods/goddesses, and their ambassador, the Overseer. The Overseer is a person born blessed by the Gods, but a mortal. They are clearly marked by Their Black angel-like wings and Violet eyes. The current Overseer, Soriah, though keeping up with her duties, is in a state of constant depression over the disappearance of her son twelve years ago, when he was five.
Yeah...I guess you could say it is a fantasy/horror. I am hoping it will have romance, and humor as well, but that is up to others along with myself. But yeah...I guess it's not that interesting, and maybe a little too complicated...so I don't really expect anyone to post their interest.
